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Forbidden To Coexist by ~XIrisMoonX:iconXIrisMoonX:



Different ends of the spectrum
They fear to be seen
        Known..
            Watched..
For the watching would be dazed
The devastation their companionship would create
        Deadly..
            Unforgiving..
Bystanders harmed because of their closeness
A taboo in the world of reality
        War..
            Peace..
Their dominance over powering the other
Forever forbidden from their wish to coexist

         
©2008 ~XIrisMoonX
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I wrote this for a contest, but I didn't stick to the topic of it. So, this is just for submission.

I highly doubt it's something I should be proud of, but I hope you enjoy.

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*Piskieface:iconPiskieface: May 7, 2008, 1:23:33 PM
Nicely written. This is a cool idea :) "A taboo in the world of reality" Gorgeous :heart:
~XIrisMoonX:iconXIrisMoonX: May 7, 2008, 1:25:57 PM
XD I liked that line too.

Thank you thank you!

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~XIrisMoonX:iconXIrisMoonX: May 7, 2008, 2:26:07 PM
:love:

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~Lyra-Panthera:iconLyra-Panthera: May 8, 2008, 8:21:57 AM
I agree with Piskieface. Excellent line. =) I like the idea of the poem as well.

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~XIrisMoonX:iconXIrisMoonX: May 8, 2008, 2:30:22 PM
Thanks my love. :heart:

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*azieser:iconazieser: May 9, 2008, 5:27:09 AM Mood: Affection
I love it. :love:

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~XIrisMoonX:iconXIrisMoonX: May 9, 2008, 10:29:26 AM
Aw, thank you dear! :hug:

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*azieser:iconazieser: May 10, 2008, 10:35:56 AM
Your welcome :hug:

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